You're welcome! And I think your pics are just fine. I like the latest set as well! I like the graininess personally.. It adds a nice rawness to the pics and helps give the feel of like live motion being present if that makes sense.My favs are 2 and 5. Especially 5. I like how her hair falls on her boobs and the hint of nipple. Fair degree of sex appeal there but not to much. 
I tend to get a bit distasteful.. which I need to work on.. Lighting is nice as well! I hear ya on the learning your camera comment though haha. I just recently figured out that the ISO setting helps determine the finished quality of the picture. I was reading in the photography section. I believe Stacy mentioned it in a thread there. And its funny because I noticed when I had my camera on auto in previous shoots sometimes it would take pretty decent pics and sometimes not. And after reading about the ISO I noticed the very nice looking pics that I had taken had a setting of ISO 200. And some of the ones I didn't care for had much higher values. But yea man good stuff keep it up!p.s. I also hear ya on how ya feel about your roona. My Taylor gives me that feeling also. I plan on ordering others but it will be hard for them to compare.
