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He is neither, he is the fallen Angel Azrael, angel of death and now is Death himself as Demithyle, Death and creator of Reapers.carlys_guy wrote: ↑Fri Mar 10, 2023 6:06 pm another spy going to fern valley ( skeleton man is the good guy right?)
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Thanks for dropping by and giving me some feedback SF! The story is not even close to being written beyond the next act. As you know I respond best to feedback, and ideas posted.
the living tribunal wrote: ↑Wed Mar 29, 2023 5:37 pm I wouldn't say lack of interest; more of case of waiting until some grand happening occurs that inspires us to make a comment; the last scene left me expecting something to happen, in the next post, that is shocking enough to provoke a response. I know feedback helps, but there's only so many ways to say 'This is looking good so far, what happens next'? and only so many times one can say it.
This is like publishing three or four pages of a comic book at a time; maybe it might help to post an entire sequence at once? By that I mean where there is a beginning, middle, and end; the end is the payoff that should be a cliffhanger or whatever; e.g., evil skull clone confesses to an affair with Baroness Fucoff when they were at Demon School or something![]()
OuchLoneRanger wrote: ↑Thu Mar 30, 2023 3:46 pm At 73 years old with a bad back, fucked up hands, a handicapped wife and still working full time for Insurance for my wife, it's not easy to move at a fast pace. Not to mention it took 2 weeks to piece together Fuccoff's court alone. I do plan on this to evenly lead to an actual combat and will model it after 40K Fantasy rules. There is rumblings of another Mischief in the future so there will be actual players running the two armies. It will be glorious!! So I am tweaking it as best as possible. But hey, I have to pay people to dress my dolls for me now! Fortunately for me my Ladies pose themselves, which helps an awful lot.
Indeed… Mr LR is a dynamo! As one of the lucky few who’ve seen him “in action”, I can attest to the enormous efforts he puts into his stories… and the huge amounts of FUN had in creating them!the living tribunal wrote: ↑Thu Mar 30, 2023 4:53 pm OuchYou've done remarkably well for those circumstances. Age is a bitch! Good to hear there might be more
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